Again, this was really crazy :D. But it was pretty cool. The intro and other parts didn't really sounded like dnb and they we're a bit slow. The drop was nice. The drums were'nt loud enough and some instruments had too much reverb on them. The melodies we're a bit short and repetetive. Also, maybe you should try creating an outro instead of cutting the song of right after the drop. However i must say you really spend some serious effort on this (considering that it took about 1 month to finish this.) It's nice to see you experimenting with new genres. Also, in respond to your last response on concactivity i have no problem with posting reviews, if you'd want to reciprocate me, just leave some reviews on my songs ;)
-AzeXiR