This was definitely much better than breaking point, the synths sounded pretty cool and the buid ups soumded good too. Although i'm not a big fan of trap i must admit that this was cool.
Just a few things to fix, first thing is that the song sounds empty at some places, put something in background, and the second thing is a bit more of my opinion, but i feel that some of the melodies were a bit off.
You tried sending this to monstercat? No offense but youte not really at the level of monstercat yet, you need to improve a lot.
I nake muaic too and i am at the same kevel as you, and i dont even thought that that a few people actually liked them. I think youre really aiming too high there.
Also, what's the bpm of the track?